Tug of Love

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February 15, 2015 by Melanie L.

I felt a vague pull emanating from the dark folds of time just beyond my horizon. I circled closer curious. The weight of true love tugged me over the threshold, and I found him waiting. In dilated time, he kisses me endlessly.


I missed the deadline to submit this in response to Yeah Write’s micro-story challenge #200 answering the question “Who do you love?” in exactly 42 words.  I had planned to tweak it more to answer the “who” a little more concretely but, what can I say, I took a mid-week space voyage and lost track of time. So, I’m submitting it here! Yeah Write community, I’d love your feedback. To my readers, how about you? Who do you love?

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8 thoughts on “Tug of Love

  1. Romantic, pretty, I like it.

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  2. You should link this up at the yeah write weekend writing showcase. Open all weekend starting Fridays at 6 pm.

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  3. Natalie DeYoung says:

    Ooo, “dilated time.” That phrase sticks. 🙂

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  4. Melanie L. says:

    Hmm, I just noticed that all my punctuation and structure disappeared. I published from my iPhone. I wonder if that had something to do with it? Oh well.

    Like

  5. innatejames says:

    “I circled closer, curious.” is a good line. It suggests a game is being played.

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Wanna-be writer, amateur oil painter, practicing law and motherhood with varied success.

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