Summer Beckoned


August 5, 2014 by Melanie L.

Summer beckoned.

Outside we bounded.

“Avoid the cornfield!” Mom hounded.

Heather we joined.

Others we summoned, including the boys.

Kickball ensued

Until “I’m re-seeding the lawn!” someone’s dad rued.

Away we sulked.

Ennui loomed.

But, Joey brightened.

“To the cul-de-sac!” he boomed.


27 thoughts on “Summer Beckoned

  1. Marcy says:

    This really brought me back to my own childhood summers when I would roam around with kids from the neighborhood, sometimes swimming, sometimes hanging out, sometimes joining a giant pickup kickball game. It’s so different now, of course, with organized sports or non-stop video games.


  2. DragonSpark says:

    Ah man, this was my life a couple years back, filled with bicycles, dirty shorts and sweaty, grinning faces. As a “mature” teenager, the bike is still there, but cleaner, and hanging out no longer happens at a playground, which I miss. We have to be responsible now… T_T
    Great, evocative post. Congrats!


  3. Enjoyed the bouncy rhythm that your summer holiday gargle evokes. Brings back memories!


  4. A cul-de-sac sounds like a great venue for kickball.


  5. Tina says:

    It’s all fun and games until someone decides to use the VW as a water slide. This was quite a trip down memory lane–thank you!


  6. Steve says:

    You really are very talented.


    • Melanie L. says:

      Thanks! It’s hard to crunch things down to 42 words. I had really wanted to add a bit about a two-fingered whistle call to dinner. If I could have put that in, then THAT would have been talent.


  7. Silverleaf says:

    What a happy rhythm and picture! Made me smile – perfect mood for the summer.


  8. tnkerr says:

    Nice job Mel. Cul de Sacs make good playgrounds due to the lack of traffic. I always hated having to stop the game for cars to go by.


  9. Suzanne says:

    Love all the memories this brought back! Very nicely done! 🙂


  10. Meg says:

    You captured summer childhood so perfectly. And a wonderful take on the prompt!


  11. Simply adored the rhythm in this piece. That bounding sensation was so well captured!


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